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Wolfie Admin
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| Subject: Re: Retaliation (CHAPTER VII: MUSE) Sat Mar 27, 2010 7:45 pm | |
| That's been fixed, thanks for pointing that out. (:
And Ash, I'll add him now. xD | |
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Wolfdra MAD GIRL
Posts : 2437 Points : 2442 Join date : 2009-05-17 Location : I'm not evil, I'm MAD
| Subject: Re: Retaliation (CHAPTER VII: MUSE) Sun Mar 28, 2010 5:20 am | |
| XD Alrighty. Now I'll hold you up to gun point until you get the next one. :3 | |
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Odd One Out Necromechanical
Posts : 746 Points : 770 Join date : 2009-05-17 Age : 29 Location : Like an impatient breeder, I'm just waiting for this forum to do something.
| Subject: Re: Retaliation (CHAPTER VII: MUSE) Mon Mar 29, 2010 1:49 am | |
| Interesting approach but didn't Dreamworks do that making Shreik the III. You have to do better than dat | |
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Wolfie Admin
Posts : 140 Points : 182 Join date : 2009-05-16 Age : 29 Location : In the midst of a sea of camera equipment.
| Subject: Re: Retaliation (CHAPTER VII: MUSE) Fri Apr 09, 2010 5:43 pm | |
| - Quote :
- Falling. What a strange feeling, falling.
‘You feel so significant… like someone’s always there to catch you.’
Ratri drew slow, deep breaths. He lay on his back, letting gravity press upon him the inexistent weight of carelessness; letting every irrevocable decision pass through his conscience and take with it the burden of everything that was, everything that would be and everything that could have been. Everything that he could never control slipped from his grasp.
‘But when you think about it, you’re just a speck. To the world, who cannot comprehend the mind’s nature, you don’t matter. They can’t see beyond their own selfishness.’
Visions suddenly flashed by in the darkness. Above him, the ghosts of his deceased kinsman danced in the endless bliss one was to achieve when one fulfilled his legacy. Predator and prey circled each other. It was peace. It was a peace that could only be settled once one passed on, having touched the realms of life.
‘But then again…’
He began to realize that there was a beauty to their patterns. He wanted to know what it was like to be with them, to run with his ancestors forever through the universe, to be omniscient, so that he may warn his beloved of danger. With him, his dynasty could live for eternity.
Ratri closed his eyes. He shut out the visions and waited for them to pass into him and lift him up to the sky with them – right where he belonged all this time. k that's your preview. out now. shoo. | |
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Odd One Out Necromechanical
Posts : 746 Points : 770 Join date : 2009-05-17 Age : 29 Location : Like an impatient breeder, I'm just waiting for this forum to do something.
| Subject: Re: Retaliation (CHAPTER VII: MUSE) Fri Apr 09, 2010 8:35 pm | |
| No Previews. I don't read previews. It's all or nothing, now give me ALL | |
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Lyokosecter5 New Kid
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| Subject: Re: Retaliation (CHAPTER VII: MUSE) Sat Apr 10, 2010 6:01 pm | |
| ;]
Can't wait for the chapter. hurrrryyy | |
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Wolfie Admin
Posts : 140 Points : 182 Join date : 2009-05-16 Age : 29 Location : In the midst of a sea of camera equipment.
| Subject: Re: Retaliation (CHAPTER VII: MUSE) Fri Jun 04, 2010 1:03 am | |
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Odd One Out Necromechanical
Posts : 746 Points : 770 Join date : 2009-05-17 Age : 29 Location : Like an impatient breeder, I'm just waiting for this forum to do something.
| Subject: Re: Retaliation (CHAPTER VII: MUSE) Fri Jun 04, 2010 1:43 am | |
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