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PostSubject: Re: Retaliation (CHAPTER VII: MUSE)   Retaliation (CHAPTER VII: MUSE) - Page 2 EmptySat Mar 27, 2010 7:45 pm

That's been fixed, thanks for pointing that out. (:

And Ash, I'll add him now. xD
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PostSubject: Re: Retaliation (CHAPTER VII: MUSE)   Retaliation (CHAPTER VII: MUSE) - Page 2 EmptySun Mar 28, 2010 5:20 am

XD Alrighty. Now I'll hold you up to gun point until you get the next one. :3
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PostSubject: Re: Retaliation (CHAPTER VII: MUSE)   Retaliation (CHAPTER VII: MUSE) - Page 2 EmptyMon Mar 29, 2010 1:49 am

Interesting approach but didn't Dreamworks do that making Shreik the III. You have to do better than dat
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PostSubject: Re: Retaliation (CHAPTER VII: MUSE)   Retaliation (CHAPTER VII: MUSE) - Page 2 EmptyFri Apr 09, 2010 5:43 pm

Quote :
Falling. What a strange feeling, falling.
‘You feel so significant… like someone’s always there to catch you.’

Ratri drew slow, deep breaths. He lay on his back, letting gravity press upon him the inexistent weight of carelessness; letting every irrevocable decision pass through his conscience and take with it the burden of everything that was, everything that would be and everything that could have been. Everything that he could never control slipped from his grasp.

‘But when you think about it, you’re just a speck. To the world, who cannot comprehend the mind’s nature, you don’t matter. They can’t see beyond their own selfishness.’

Visions suddenly flashed by in the darkness. Above him, the ghosts of his deceased kinsman danced in the endless bliss one was to achieve when one fulfilled his legacy. Predator and prey circled each other. It was peace. It was a peace that could only be settled once one passed on, having touched the realms of life.

‘But then again…’

He began to realize that there was a beauty to their patterns. He wanted to know what it was like to be with them, to run with his ancestors forever through the universe, to be omniscient, so that he may warn his beloved of danger. With him, his dynasty could live for eternity.

Ratri closed his eyes. He shut out the visions and waited for them to pass into him and lift him up to the sky with them – right where he belonged all this time.

k that's your preview. out now. shoo.
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PostSubject: Re: Retaliation (CHAPTER VII: MUSE)   Retaliation (CHAPTER VII: MUSE) - Page 2 EmptyFri Apr 09, 2010 8:35 pm

No Previews. I don't read previews. It's all or nothing, now give me ALL
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PostSubject: Re: Retaliation (CHAPTER VII: MUSE)   Retaliation (CHAPTER VII: MUSE) - Page 2 EmptySat Apr 10, 2010 6:01 pm

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Can't wait for the chapter. hurrrryyy
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PostSubject: Re: Retaliation (CHAPTER VII: MUSE)   Retaliation (CHAPTER VII: MUSE) - Page 2 EmptyFri Jun 04, 2010 1:03 am

2010 woot
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PostSubject: Re: Retaliation (CHAPTER VII: MUSE)   Retaliation (CHAPTER VII: MUSE) - Page 2 EmptyFri Jun 04, 2010 1:43 am

Yea...so now we wait
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